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Drabble: Backwards

Fandom: Primeval
Pairing: Danny / Becker
Rating: R-15
Notes: For primeval100 challenge 229: Backwards


Backwards


Becker lay sprawled on the floor, Danny’s head resting on his shoulder as they caught their breath. He hadn’t meant this to happen; one minute they were arguing, and then… He wasn’t sure what happened, except he had a sudden urge to rip Quinn’s clothes off and shag him senseless. Evidently, from their current state of undress and sweat-soaked bodies, Danny had no objections.

“You want to have dinner tonight?” he asked suddenly.

Danny propped himself on one elbow and smiled at him. “You’ve got this a bit backwards; you’re supposed to buy me dinner before you shag me.”



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samueljames
Sep. 23rd, 2011 07:06 pm (UTC)
Love Danny's cheeky comment. I do like Becker offering him dinner though.
ebonyfeather
Sep. 23rd, 2011 07:12 pm (UTC)
Becker's just a romantic at heart... He may get it in the wrong order, but he does try.
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lukadreaming
Sep. 23rd, 2011 07:17 pm (UTC)
LOL! Typical Danny response! Great drabble.
ebonyfeather
Sep. 23rd, 2011 07:33 pm (UTC)
Danny might tease, but he'll still say yes.
telperion_15
Sep. 23rd, 2011 07:34 pm (UTC)
ROFL!!! Oh boys! (Although actually, I rather like events in this order... *g*)
ebonyfeather
Sep. 23rd, 2011 07:37 pm (UTC)
This order does seem to work well...
jaynedoll
Sep. 23rd, 2011 08:02 pm (UTC)
Becker is a gentleman - a bit of a slut as well but a slut with manners *g*
ebonyfeather
Sep. 23rd, 2011 08:23 pm (UTC)
I think that's the best description of him I've seen!

I'm sure he's a romantic at heart, he's just not getting it quite right...
fredbassett
Sep. 23rd, 2011 08:03 pm (UTC)
LOL, nice one, boys!

I do like these two shagging.
ebonyfeather
Sep. 23rd, 2011 08:25 pm (UTC)
I'm sure there'll be lots more shagging after dinner *g*
nietie
Sep. 23rd, 2011 08:07 pm (UTC)
LOL Great use of the prompt and great mental image.
Typical Danny comment. But he'll definitely say yes.
ebonyfeather
Sep. 23rd, 2011 08:26 pm (UTC)
He'll definitely say yes- no one could resist Becker.
knitekat
Sep. 23rd, 2011 08:24 pm (UTC)
LOL. Nice use of the prompt.
ebonyfeather
Sep. 23rd, 2011 08:27 pm (UTC)
Thanks! Glad you liked it.
fififolle
Sep. 23rd, 2011 08:39 pm (UTC)
LMAO!! Oh boys. Perfect.
ebonyfeather
Sep. 23rd, 2011 08:49 pm (UTC)
And this is just the beginning...
adafrog
Sep. 23rd, 2011 10:51 pm (UTC)
lolol
ebonyfeather
Sep. 24th, 2011 07:43 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
celeste9
Sep. 24th, 2011 12:30 am (UTC)
Hee! Becker would offer dinner after they've shagged. This is so very them.
ebonyfeather
Sep. 24th, 2011 07:44 pm (UTC)
Becker may get it in the wrong order, but he does try.
zoi_no_miko
Sep. 24th, 2011 01:02 am (UTC)
Hotttttt. Yes please. Adorably sexy and very them. <3
ebonyfeather
Sep. 24th, 2011 07:46 pm (UTC)
I'm sure this will be the start of things to come...*g*
lsellersfic
Sep. 25th, 2011 02:47 pm (UTC)
Less uncertainty this way round though *g*
ebonyfeather
Sep. 25th, 2011 04:26 pm (UTC)
True, but it's not like Danny would say no anyway.
deinonychus_1
Sep. 25th, 2011 03:31 pm (UTC)
lol! Love Becker suddenly deciding to be romantic, and Danny's reaction.
ebonyfeather
Sep. 25th, 2011 04:27 pm (UTC)
Becker may do things in the wrong order, but he tries.
cordeliadelayne
Sep. 25th, 2011 08:14 pm (UTC)
Hee! Cute :D
ebonyfeather
Sep. 25th, 2011 09:45 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
kristen_mara
Sep. 27th, 2011 07:09 am (UTC)

Of course Danny had no objections, LOL.

Love Becker's offer and Danny's reaction - on both counts!

ebonyfeather
Sep. 27th, 2011 07:12 pm (UTC)
Danny would never object to Becker's advances *g*
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