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2 Drabbles: The wrong side of the anomaly

Fandom: Primeval
Pairing: None
Rating: PG
Notes: For primeval100 challenge 215: Trapped on the wrong side of the anomaly.




The wrong side of the anomaly

 
 
 
Becker watched in horror as the anomaly closed suddenly, the sparkling light gone in the blink of an eye. What now? Did he sit there and hope it re-opened? It might never do that.
 
He should have stopped Danny, had them both go through together, but Danny was impulsive and wouldn’t wait. Now Danny was stranded in some unknown time and Becker should be with him. Instead, he was stuck here, left behind and unable to protect Danny.
 
Connor came up and laid a hand on his shoulder. “We’ll get him back,” he said.
 
Becker wished he shared Connor’s confidence.
 
 
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Danny saw the anomaly close mere seconds after he’d stepped through and stared in disbelief. Connor had said it was stable yet it had closed so suddenly that Becker, who had been right behind him, hadn’t even had the chance to come through.
 
“Shit!”
 
His anger was aimed more at his own stupidity than anything. Why the fuck hadn’t he waited for Becker? He had been eager to be the first through, that’s why. Now he was stuck here, wherever here was, on his own.
 
In the distance, something roared and Danny swore again. Could his day get any worse? 
  
  
 

Comments

( 18 comments — Leave a comment )
lukadreaming
Jun. 18th, 2011 09:50 pm (UTC)
Ooh! Eek! Poor Danny . . .
ebonyfeather
Jun. 20th, 2011 07:27 pm (UTC)
They'll get him back...
deinonychus_1
Jun. 18th, 2011 09:52 pm (UTC)
meep! Poor Danny, and now Becker is going to be all angsty and guilt-ridden.
ebonyfeather
Jun. 20th, 2011 07:28 pm (UTC)
But Becker looks so pretty when he's angsty...
tli
Jun. 18th, 2011 10:23 pm (UTC)
Ooh! Nicely done!
ebonyfeather
Jun. 20th, 2011 07:28 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
telperion_15
Jun. 18th, 2011 10:32 pm (UTC)
Eek eek eek! It's gonna reopen, right???
ebonyfeather
Jun. 20th, 2011 07:29 pm (UTC)
I'm sure it will.
jooles34
Jun. 18th, 2011 10:48 pm (UTC)
Nicely done from both sides and a hefty does of eeek too.
ebonyfeather
Jun. 20th, 2011 07:29 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
rodlox
Jun. 19th, 2011 07:52 am (UTC)
when you think things like that, Danny, it always gets worse. like you taking a fancy to Helen. ;)

seriously, excellent drabbles.
ebonyfeather
Jun. 20th, 2011 07:32 pm (UTC)
Now that would make things worse!

Thank you!
fredbassett
Jun. 19th, 2011 03:04 pm (UTC)
Meep!!! Poor boys!!
ebonyfeather
Jun. 20th, 2011 07:32 pm (UTC)
I'm sure they'll get Danny back somehow.
knitekat
Jun. 19th, 2011 07:07 pm (UTC)
Meep. Poor Becker's going to be all angsty *nods*
ebonyfeather
Jun. 20th, 2011 07:33 pm (UTC)
He will be, but he looks so lovely when he's angsty...
cordeliadelayne
Jun. 19th, 2011 08:35 pm (UTC)
Oh noes!
ebonyfeather
Jun. 20th, 2011 07:34 pm (UTC)
I'm sure they'll be okay...
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