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Fandom: Primeval
Pairing: None
Rating: PG
Notes: For primeval100 challenge 213: The light at the end of the tunnel.


 

 

The light at the end of the tunnel

 

 

 

Becker’s knees hurt, his hands scraped from the concrete floor. In front of him, Matt moved on all fours as fast as he could, with Becker right on his heels.

 

The creatures had followed them into the factory, blocking the entrance, leaving their only way out a narrow drainage tunnel that led under the floor.

 

“I can see daylight!” Matt called back over his shoulder and putting on an extra burst of speed.

 

Becker heard the sound of scuffling behind him.

 

“Matt,” he said, listening. “Move faster.”

 

He just hoped they reached the end before the creatures caught them up.

 

 

 





 

Comments

( 20 comments — Leave a comment )
deinonychus_1
Jun. 6th, 2011 09:44 pm (UTC)
meep! Move faster, boys!
ebonyfeather
Jun. 6th, 2011 10:13 pm (UTC)
I'm sure they will...
eriah211
Jun. 6th, 2011 09:53 pm (UTC)
Oh, noes! They made it, didn't they? Sure! Right? *iz worried*
ebonyfeather
Jun. 6th, 2011 10:13 pm (UTC)
Don't worry, they made it.
fredbassett
Jun. 6th, 2011 09:56 pm (UTC)
Meep!!!
ebonyfeather
Jun. 6th, 2011 10:14 pm (UTC)
It's okay, they'll make it
lukadreaming
Jun. 6th, 2011 09:57 pm (UTC)
Eek!
ebonyfeather
Jun. 6th, 2011 10:14 pm (UTC)
They'll be fine...
knitekat
Jun. 6th, 2011 10:12 pm (UTC)
*Meep* But the boys made it out OK, yes?
ebonyfeather
Jun. 6th, 2011 10:15 pm (UTC)
Yes, they made it out.
mermaidstarfish
Jun. 6th, 2011 10:23 pm (UTC)
Argh, please let them have moved fast enough!
ebonyfeather
Jun. 6th, 2011 10:32 pm (UTC)
They will...
adafrog
Jun. 6th, 2011 11:02 pm (UTC)
Run boys!
ebonyfeather
Jun. 9th, 2011 05:19 pm (UTC)
They will...
jooles34
Jun. 7th, 2011 04:57 pm (UTC)
Oh, that's given me the major eeps!
ebonyfeather
Jun. 9th, 2011 05:20 pm (UTC)
Aww, loving the angsty-Becker icon!

Thanks for reading.
telperion_15
Jun. 7th, 2011 07:28 pm (UTC)
Eek! Definitely move faster, boys!
ebonyfeather
Jun. 9th, 2011 05:20 pm (UTC)
They'll make it...
cordeliadelayne
Jun. 13th, 2011 09:12 pm (UTC)
Eek, dramatic!
ebonyfeather
Jun. 14th, 2011 05:45 pm (UTC)
*g* Thanks!
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