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Drabble: Monsters in the dark, pt 2

Fandom: Primeval
Pairing: None
Rating: PG
Notes: A follow-on from this week's primeval100 drabble. Part one is here




Monsters in the dark, pt 2

 

 

Becker heard the faint scuffling, then a crash as something fell over. He turned, gun ready and crept forward as silently as he could. Though he had been trained for dangerous situations, his heart pounded in his chest as he heard the noise again.

 

Becker fired the EMD just as the generator flared to life, the lights coming on. He groaned. He was never going to live this down.

 

Connor looked over Becker’s shoulder at the unconscious rat, lying inside the empty paint can. He smiled.

 

“If anyone asks, we’ll tell them it was an evil, prehistoric rat,” he promised.

 

 

 

 


Comments

( 26 comments — Leave a comment )
lukadreaming
May. 14th, 2011 07:17 pm (UTC)
LOL! Nasty little blighters, those evil prehistoric rats *bg*.
ebonyfeather
May. 14th, 2011 07:22 pm (UTC)
They are indeed, or they will be when Connor finishes telling the others.
tli
May. 14th, 2011 07:26 pm (UTC)
Tee hee! But better safe than sorry!
ebonyfeather
May. 14th, 2011 07:29 pm (UTC)
Of course.

Thanks.
fredbassett
May. 14th, 2011 07:32 pm (UTC)
LOL!! Nice one, soldier boy :)
ebonyfeather
May. 14th, 2011 07:48 pm (UTC)
He was just being overprotective of Connor...
knitekat
May. 14th, 2011 09:47 pm (UTC)
LOL. everyone knows how evil those nasty prehistoric rats are *g* Yay for overprotective Becker.
ebonyfeather
May. 14th, 2011 10:08 pm (UTC)
Poor Becker; I suspect that Connor will be reminding him of this for a while.
knitekat
May. 14th, 2011 10:22 pm (UTC)
*nods* I suspect you might indeed be correct *g*
deinonychus_1
May. 14th, 2011 10:32 pm (UTC)
aww, lol *pets the boys* He was just being extra vigilant.

Um, one thing - you don't actually appear to have cross posted this to P100!
ebonyfeather
May. 14th, 2011 10:38 pm (UTC)
Thanks.

This one wasn't technically a p100 drabble, just a follow-up, but I guess it does fit the prompt... *toddles off to cross post it*
deinonychus_1
May. 14th, 2011 10:44 pm (UTC)
it totally fits the prompt :-)
ebonyfeather
May. 14th, 2011 10:48 pm (UTC)
All sorted: it's posted now.
eriah211
May. 15th, 2011 10:34 am (UTC)
LOL, and evil HUGE prehistoric rat *nods* ^_^
ebonyfeather
May. 15th, 2011 04:46 pm (UTC)
Oh, definitely!
telperion_15
May. 15th, 2011 10:46 am (UTC)
LMAO!!!! Brilliant follow-up!
ebonyfeather
May. 15th, 2011 04:48 pm (UTC)
Thanks! Poor Becker- possibly a bit overenthusiastic with the EMD...
nietie
May. 15th, 2011 11:34 am (UTC)
LOL It was an evil, prehistoric rat *nods*
ebonyfeather
May. 15th, 2011 04:49 pm (UTC)
That's their story and they're sticking to it...
echo_fangirl
May. 15th, 2011 12:01 pm (UTC)
I'm sure that rat was totally about to give them both the plague or something. *nods*
ebonyfeather
May. 15th, 2011 04:50 pm (UTC)
Totally.
dopeydora_67
May. 15th, 2011 04:23 pm (UTC)
LOL, Brilliant...those pesky rat get into everything.
ebonyfeather
May. 15th, 2011 04:51 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
Sneaky little rats.

lsellersfic
May. 16th, 2011 02:17 pm (UTC)
LOL! Poor Becker!
ebonyfeather
May. 18th, 2011 08:10 pm (UTC)
I'm sure Connor will make it sound a lot more heroic when he tells it.
cordeliadelayne
May. 20th, 2011 11:43 pm (UTC)
Hee!
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