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Drabble: Monsters in the dark

Fandom: Primeval
Pairing: None
Rating: PG
Notes: For primeval100 challenge 210: Fear



Monsters in the dark

 

 

There was no power, the building in complete darkness, with numerous creatures roaming about upstairs. Connor knelt before the generator in the basement, fiddling with the mess of wires and switches. They needed to get the lights back on if they had any chance of getting out of here in one piece.

 

Suddenly he heard a sound and turned, wide eyed, to Becker.

 

“What was that?”

 

Becker smiled. “It’s fine. Just keep working.”

 

When Connor turned away, Becker’s smile dropped and he raised his gun. Though he hadn’t wanted to worry Connor, there was definitely something in here with them.

 

 

 

 

 


Comments

( 37 comments — Leave a comment )
lukadreaming
May. 12th, 2011 09:18 pm (UTC)
Ooh! Eek!

*Dives behind the sofa*
ebonyfeather
May. 12th, 2011 09:36 pm (UTC)
It's okay: Becker won't let anything happen to him.
vintagememories
May. 12th, 2011 09:24 pm (UTC)
Ooh watch out Becker, Connor, hope he's able to get the lights back on before it chooses to attack. Great little drabble.
ebonyfeather
May. 12th, 2011 09:37 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
They'll be fine, I'm sure they will.
eriah211
May. 12th, 2011 09:28 pm (UTC)
*gasps*
Becker! Connor! My poor boys! *hugs them protectively*
ebonyfeather
May. 12th, 2011 09:38 pm (UTC)
Becker won't let anything get too close.
canadian_jay
May. 12th, 2011 09:47 pm (UTC)
Eep! *crosses fingers and toes that Becker keeps them alright*
ebonyfeather
May. 12th, 2011 09:50 pm (UTC)
He won't let anything happen to Connor.
tli
May. 12th, 2011 09:51 pm (UTC)
Ooh - but you can't just leave it there!
ebonyfeather
May. 13th, 2011 07:29 pm (UTC)
There may possibly be more... depends what next week's prompt is.
knitekat
May. 12th, 2011 10:10 pm (UTC)
Meep. What's in the dark? *pokes for more*
tay_21
May. 12th, 2011 10:12 pm (UTC)
*joins in the poking*
ebonyfeather
May. 13th, 2011 07:23 pm (UTC)
*dodges the poking* why do I get the feeling I'll end up writing a follow-up to this...

knitekat
May. 13th, 2011 08:47 pm (UTC)
No idea

*steps aside for the mob of burning-torch-and-pitchfork-wielding chittering raccoons to pass by*
tay_21
May. 12th, 2011 10:12 pm (UTC)
MEEP!

Oh, I hope everything turns out OK for the boys. Great job. :-)
ebonyfeather
May. 13th, 2011 07:24 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
fredbassett
May. 12th, 2011 10:21 pm (UTC)
Eeep, scary!!!
ebonyfeather
May. 13th, 2011 07:23 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
unseen_quill
May. 12th, 2011 10:27 pm (UTC)
Ooooh...creepy. I hope gunshots aren't too distracting for Connor.

Nice one. :)
ebonyfeather
May. 13th, 2011 07:25 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
maddie_amber
May. 13th, 2011 01:24 am (UTC)
I hate things creeping around in the dark. I hope whatever it is it has very poor night vision and a lousy sense of smell. Then it won't find them. Specially if its also deaf as a stone. Good drabble!
ebonyfeather
May. 13th, 2011 07:27 pm (UTC)
That Timmy icon is cute!

I'm sure Becker will get the critter before it gets them.
telperion_15
May. 13th, 2011 07:02 am (UTC)
Eeeeeeeeeeeek!!! Becker will kill it dead though, right?
ebonyfeather
May. 13th, 2011 07:27 pm (UTC)
Becker versus the Critter? No contest!
kristen_mara
May. 13th, 2011 10:45 am (UTC)

Creepy, scary! And ProtectiveBecker!
ebonyfeather
May. 13th, 2011 07:28 pm (UTC)
Becker will always look after Connor.
nietie
May. 13th, 2011 03:53 pm (UTC)
Eek! Great suspense!
ebonyfeather
May. 13th, 2011 07:27 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
cordeliadelayne
May. 13th, 2011 10:31 pm (UTC)
Eeek!
ebonyfeather
May. 14th, 2011 07:25 pm (UTC)
Thanks.
The next part is up now...
lsellersfic
May. 14th, 2011 07:23 pm (UTC)
Meep!
ebonyfeather
May. 14th, 2011 07:25 pm (UTC)
Thanks.
The next part is up now...
deinonychus_1
May. 14th, 2011 10:22 pm (UTC)
eek! Work faster Connor! And stay alert Becker!
ebonyfeather
May. 14th, 2011 10:42 pm (UTC)
It's okay- Becker will look after him.
dopeydora_67
May. 15th, 2011 04:44 pm (UTC)
Oh no What's there?


*giggles* I do know as I have read the other part already....*g*
ebonyfeather
May. 15th, 2011 04:52 pm (UTC)
I couldn't help it- they all ganged up on me for a sequel...
dopeydora_67
May. 15th, 2011 05:04 pm (UTC)
Sequels are always good *g*
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