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Drabble: Cold Blood

Fandom: Primeval
Pairing: None
Rating: PG
Notes: For primeval100 challenge 207: Cold Blood

 

 

Cold Blood

 

Danny looked at the man sitting in the interview room and thought of the boy he’d once known. The brother he knew had been a good kid. Sure, he’d been obnoxious and irritating but weren’t all baby brothers?

 

They told him of Ethan’s crimes and he’d seen the utter lack of remorse Ethan had for the people he’d killed.

 

If he looked hard, he could still see the boy behind the added years but what was on the inside…He couldn’t wrap his mind around the fact that the kid he’d watched grow up had become a cold blooded killer.

 

 

Comments

( 20 comments — Leave a comment )
maddie_amber
Apr. 24th, 2011 01:57 am (UTC)
It would be tough for anyone to realize a sibling was a murderer, but I would imagine it would be even tougher for a former police officer. Nice look into Danny's head and thumbnail sketch of Ethan as well.
ebonyfeather
Apr. 25th, 2011 07:21 pm (UTC)
Thanks! I do feel sorry for Danny in all this, having to face what his brother has done.
lukadreaming
Apr. 24th, 2011 08:11 am (UTC)
Powerful little cameo.
ebonyfeather
Apr. 25th, 2011 07:21 pm (UTC)
Thank you.
deinonychus_1
Apr. 24th, 2011 09:48 am (UTC)
eek! Poor Danny.
ebonyfeather
Apr. 25th, 2011 07:24 pm (UTC)
Poor Danny indeed!
fredbassett
Apr. 24th, 2011 11:18 am (UTC)
Poor Danny. But I still can't see him giving up on Patrick.
ebonyfeather
Apr. 25th, 2011 07:33 pm (UTC)
He won't give up- they're family.
cordeliadelayne
Apr. 24th, 2011 02:27 pm (UTC)
Aw, poor Danny.
ebonyfeather
Apr. 25th, 2011 07:33 pm (UTC)
Thanks for reading.
telperion_15
Apr. 24th, 2011 03:29 pm (UTC)
*wibble* This works really well.
ebonyfeather
Apr. 25th, 2011 07:33 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
knitekat
Apr. 24th, 2011 03:37 pm (UTC)
Eek for poor Danny.
ebonyfeather
Apr. 25th, 2011 07:34 pm (UTC)
Thanks for reading
dopeydora_67
Apr. 25th, 2011 07:54 am (UTC)
Ohhh poor Danny and Ethan too.
ebonyfeather
Apr. 25th, 2011 07:34 pm (UTC)
They'll find a way to deal with this
nietie
Apr. 25th, 2011 08:56 am (UTC)
Nice look into Danny's head.
There's still a bit of Patrick inside Ethan, so don't give up, Danny.
ebonyfeather
Apr. 25th, 2011 07:35 pm (UTC)
Danny won't give up on him.

Cute icon, by the way.
lsellersfic
Apr. 26th, 2011 09:14 pm (UTC)
Poor danny!
ebonyfeather
Apr. 29th, 2011 10:08 pm (UTC)
Thanks for reading.
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