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Drabble: 'Twas the night before christmas

Fandom: Primeval
Pairing/s: Connor/Lester
Rating: PG
Notes: For primeval100: challenge 346: Twas the night before Christmas.







Twas the night before Christmas





‘Twas the night before Christmas and all through the house,
One creature was stirring, but it wasn’t a mouse.
He crept to the parcels, placed in the lounge,
And examined each one, not making a sound.

Eventually a light shone through the door,
Revealing the culprit, sitting on the floor.
Lester took in the sight, suppressing a yawn,
“What are you doing? It’s not even dawn.”

“It’s exciting, my first Christmas with you,
Can I open a present? Or maybe two?”
Connor was dismayed as James shook his head,
“You can have something better if you come back to bed.”





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Comments

( 34 comments — Leave a comment )
aunteeneenah
Dec. 19th, 2013 08:13 pm (UTC)
Love it! so very Connor and Lester does know his Connor... knows what he wants. *g*
ebonyfeather
Dec. 19th, 2013 08:46 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Connor strikes me as the kind of person who, even as a adult, would be awake before dawn to open his presents.
aunteeneenah
Dec. 19th, 2013 10:27 pm (UTC)
OMG!I love your icon! What sweet mushy faces.
Yes, Connor would most definitely be up before dawn. *g*
lukadreaming
Dec. 19th, 2013 08:20 pm (UTC)
LOL! That's brilliant!
ebonyfeather
Dec. 19th, 2013 08:46 pm (UTC)
Thank you! This one was fun to write.
knitekat
Dec. 19th, 2013 08:43 pm (UTC)
LOL. That is brilliant and I'm sure Lester will have a lovely present for Connor back in their bed ;)
ebonyfeather
Dec. 19th, 2013 08:54 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Connor won't take much convicing that going back to bed is the best option...
knitekat
Dec. 19th, 2013 09:31 pm (UTC)
No convincing at all ;)
tli
Dec. 19th, 2013 08:56 pm (UTC)
Great fun!
ebonyfeather
Dec. 30th, 2013 10:26 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
eriah211
Dec. 19th, 2013 09:48 pm (UTC)
Aaawww and LOL, great last line! ^_^
ebonyfeather
Dec. 30th, 2013 10:27 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
goldarrow
Dec. 20th, 2013 06:22 am (UTC)
LOL, Lester is such a smart man!
ebonyfeather
Dec. 30th, 2013 10:28 pm (UTC)
He's certainly got Connor figured out.
nietie
Dec. 20th, 2013 01:21 pm (UTC)
Best Christmas poem ever!
ebonyfeather
Dec. 30th, 2013 10:29 pm (UTC)
Aww, thank you!
fredbassett
Dec. 20th, 2013 02:09 pm (UTC)
LOL!! Nice one!
ebonyfeather
Dec. 30th, 2013 10:29 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
clea2011
Dec. 21st, 2013 12:17 am (UTC)
LOL! I'm sure that does count, very clever :)
ebonyfeather
Dec. 30th, 2013 10:30 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
fififolle
Dec. 21st, 2013 04:23 pm (UTC)
Hahahah! Very clever and funny :D
ebonyfeather
Dec. 30th, 2013 10:31 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
deinonychus_1
Dec. 21st, 2013 04:52 pm (UTC)
Lol and awwww! That was great!
ebonyfeather
Dec. 30th, 2013 10:31 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
kristen_mara
Dec. 22nd, 2013 11:06 am (UTC)

Sporfles - great poem, and Lester does come up with the best solutions, doesn't he?




ebonyfeather
Dec. 30th, 2013 10:32 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
dreamer_98
Dec. 22nd, 2013 11:25 pm (UTC)
Hehe, nice save Lester. :)
ebonyfeather
Dec. 30th, 2013 10:33 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
cordeliadelayne
Dec. 24th, 2013 01:56 am (UTC)
Hee, that was great!
ebonyfeather
Dec. 30th, 2013 10:33 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
stealingpennies
Dec. 28th, 2013 06:11 pm (UTC)

Hahaha! That works perfectly for both characters. Nicely done.
ebonyfeather
Dec. 30th, 2013 10:34 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
lsellersfic
Jan. 4th, 2014 01:57 pm (UTC)
Ohh! Perfect!!!
goldarrow
Mar. 11th, 2016 05:55 pm (UTC)
*snorfle*
Poor Connor!
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