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Drabble: Shivers

Fandom: Primeval
Pairing/s: none
Rating: PG
Notes: For primeval100: challenge 342: Harbinger.



Shivers







Abby stopped mid-sentence when she realised that Nick was no longer walking beside her. He was standing in the middle of the corridor near the Detector room, a frown on his face as he stared at the spot he’d just walked past.

“Cutter? Are you okay?”

Nick glanced up at her and seemed to visibly shake himself. “I don’t know why, but every time I walk past this bit of the corridor I get a cold shiver, like someone just walked over my grave.” He smiled. “It’s stupid, I know.”

Abby looked back, but there was nothing to see.









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Comments

( 26 comments — Leave a comment )
dreamer_98
Nov. 26th, 2013 07:29 pm (UTC)
Very ominous. Nice.
ebonyfeather
Dec. 19th, 2013 04:08 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
reggietate
Nov. 26th, 2013 07:38 pm (UTC)
*wibble* Just don't go running after any crazy ex-wives, Cutter, and you'll be fine...
ebonyfeather
Dec. 19th, 2013 04:08 pm (UTC)
If only we could warn him...
lukadreaming
Nov. 26th, 2013 07:55 pm (UTC)
That's very spooky and made me shiver!
ebonyfeather
Dec. 19th, 2013 04:08 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
clea2011
Nov. 26th, 2013 09:03 pm (UTC)
Ooh, very good use of the prompt! Spooky!
ebonyfeather
Dec. 19th, 2013 04:08 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
knitekat
Nov. 26th, 2013 09:20 pm (UTC)
Eeek! Spooky and Nick, do not run into the burning ARC and you'll be fine.
ebonyfeather
Dec. 19th, 2013 04:09 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
adafrog
Nov. 27th, 2013 12:29 am (UTC)
Very good.
ebonyfeather
Dec. 19th, 2013 04:09 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
cordeliadelayne
Nov. 27th, 2013 01:25 am (UTC)
*meep*
ebonyfeather
Dec. 19th, 2013 04:09 pm (UTC)
Thanks for reading!
fififolle
Nov. 27th, 2013 06:59 pm (UTC)
Wah! It certainly gave me shivers!!
ebonyfeather
Dec. 19th, 2013 04:10 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
lsellersfic
Nov. 30th, 2013 04:21 pm (UTC)
Oooh! Neat take on the prompt.
ebonyfeather
Dec. 19th, 2013 04:10 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
fredbassett
Nov. 30th, 2013 04:29 pm (UTC)
Oooh very neat!
ebonyfeather
Dec. 19th, 2013 04:10 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
eriah211
Nov. 30th, 2013 10:27 pm (UTC)
Oooohh, spooky! O_O
ebonyfeather
Dec. 19th, 2013 04:10 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
stealingpennies
Dec. 2nd, 2013 02:02 pm (UTC)

Oh, nicely foreboding.
ebonyfeather
Dec. 19th, 2013 04:11 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
deinonychus_1
Dec. 8th, 2013 07:28 pm (UTC)
Meeeep! Ominous.
ebonyfeather
Dec. 19th, 2013 04:11 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
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