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Drabble: Full moon

Fandom: Primeval
Characters: O/C (POV)
Rating: PG
Notes: For primeval100: challenge 313: Full moon. Part of Man’s Best Friend series – Previous parts: 1 / 2 / 3 / 4 & 5 / 6 / 7 / 8 / 9 / 10 / 11 / 12 / 13 / 14 / 15 / 16 / 17 / 18 / 19 / 20 / 21 / 22 / 23 / 24

Notes: *Outsider POV



Full moon





Sitting at the window of his holiday flat, Bill watched. They’d been on the beach for a while now, three people, hiding near the cliff: a little blonde woman, a tall man in jeans and a bulletproof vest, a man in a leather jacket. The fourth person, a skinny young man, was bouncing around the beach near the old overflow pipe, waving his arms around like a lunatic.

He hadn’t a clue what they were doing but it was amusing as hell to watch.

Bill smiled; it was a full moon tonight. It always seemed to bring out the crazies.






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dreamer_98
May. 2nd, 2013 08:56 pm (UTC)
Hee, from an outsider's view, the team must seem a little batty. Great POV piece!
ebonyfeather
May. 2nd, 2013 09:27 pm (UTC)
I imagine it would be good entertainment for the locals!
eriah211
May. 2nd, 2013 09:06 pm (UTC)
*sporfles*
That had to be quite a sight. Lovely!
ebonyfeather
May. 2nd, 2013 09:28 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
aunteeneenah
May. 2nd, 2013 09:36 pm (UTC)
I can just imagine what he was thinking. lmao
ebonyfeather
May. 2nd, 2013 10:11 pm (UTC)
They would be funny to watch.
knitekat
May. 2nd, 2013 10:25 pm (UTC)
Hee, the team probably looked very odd to an outsider.
ebonyfeather
May. 17th, 2013 05:44 pm (UTC)
They would.
freddiejoey
May. 2nd, 2013 10:28 pm (UTC)
That's great.
ebonyfeather
May. 17th, 2013 05:45 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
clea2011
May. 2nd, 2013 11:19 pm (UTC)
LOL! Yes, that's how the team might well look to an outsider! :)
ebonyfeather
May. 17th, 2013 05:45 pm (UTC)
It would all look a bit mad.
47eleven
May. 3rd, 2013 01:28 am (UTC)
Excellent POV!
ebonyfeather
May. 17th, 2013 05:46 pm (UTC)
Thanks.

And, may I say, that is a fab icon!
joshinator
May. 3rd, 2013 02:59 am (UTC)
Very original.
ebonyfeather
May. 17th, 2013 05:46 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
nietie
May. 3rd, 2013 12:22 pm (UTC)
From an outsider's POV it IS a crazy team *g*
ebonyfeather
May. 17th, 2013 05:47 pm (UTC)
They do make a mis-matched bunch...
cordeliadelayne
May. 3rd, 2013 07:31 pm (UTC)
Hee!
ebonyfeather
May. 17th, 2013 05:47 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
fififolle
May. 3rd, 2013 08:16 pm (UTC)
LOL!! *passes Bill a mug of hot chocolate and settles down to watch with him*
ebonyfeather
May. 17th, 2013 05:48 pm (UTC)
I think we'd all sit down to enjoy the entertainment.
fredbassett
May. 3rd, 2013 09:47 pm (UTC)
Nice one. I like outsider's POVs.
ebonyfeather
May. 17th, 2013 05:48 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
kristen_mara
May. 4th, 2013 12:58 am (UTC)

LOL. Your tax dollars at work, Bill - trained professionals *G*


ebonyfeather
May. 17th, 2013 05:48 pm (UTC)
They may look crazy, but they always seem to get the job done.
natchris
May. 4th, 2013 01:05 am (UTC)
Well done!!
ebonyfeather
May. 17th, 2013 05:49 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
lsellersfic
May. 4th, 2013 02:59 pm (UTC)
Hee! Good use of the prompt!
ebonyfeather
May. 17th, 2013 05:49 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
flaccidduck
May. 5th, 2013 06:48 am (UTC)
Nicely done!
ebonyfeather
May. 17th, 2013 05:49 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
stealingpennies
May. 5th, 2013 10:22 am (UTC)

Very nice. Love the last line - crazies indeed!
ebonyfeather
May. 17th, 2013 05:49 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
judithjohn
May. 6th, 2013 04:31 am (UTC)
Hee hee!
ebonyfeather
May. 17th, 2013 05:50 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
deinonychus_1
May. 11th, 2013 07:25 pm (UTC)
Lol! They must look a right sight!
ebonyfeather
May. 17th, 2013 05:50 pm (UTC)
They really would look mad to someone who hadn't a clue what they were attempting to do.
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