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Drabble: Found

Fandom: Primeval
Pairing: None
Rating: PG
Notes: For primeval100: challenge 289: Headlights on a dark road.




Found


The country lanes were dark, the moon providing barely any light. According to readouts, the anomaly was here, somewhere.

Had Becker been travelling any faster he would have hit the creature when it appeared in the road. He stopped mere feet from it, the critter’s eyes huge, alarmed, as it sat frozen to the spot, staring up at him.

Becker radioed the others his location and got out of the car. It was only little and if he caught it now he wouldn’t have to chase it later, he reasoned, offering it a biscuit from his stash in the glovebox.




** Virtual cookies to everyone who has commented on my last two drabbles- life appears to be taking over at present and I haven't yet got to replying to them.



Comments

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lukadreaming
Nov. 20th, 2012 07:45 pm (UTC)
Cunning plan! And I'd happily accept a biccie from Becker *g*.
ebonyfeather
Nov. 20th, 2012 07:47 pm (UTC)
I think most of us would follow Becker anyway- the biscuit would be a bonus.
nietie
Nov. 20th, 2012 07:48 pm (UTC)
Awww, good plan, Becker.

Best of luck with all the RL stuff *hugs*
ebonyfeather
Nov. 20th, 2012 07:53 pm (UTC)
Thanks!

The RL stuff isn't bad (except feeling ill) but it's taking over! Never mind- soon, if all goes according to plan, I could have my own house and a new job!
nietie
Nov. 20th, 2012 07:57 pm (UTC)
*fingers crossed for the house hunt and job hunt*
ebonyfeather
Nov. 20th, 2012 08:16 pm (UTC)
Thanks.
knitekat
Nov. 20th, 2012 08:12 pm (UTC)
Becker and his cunning plans (and he better keep his stash of biccies secret *g*)
ebonyfeather
Nov. 20th, 2012 08:15 pm (UTC)
Becker just doesn't want to chase the critter around in the dark later on!
knitekat
Nov. 20th, 2012 08:29 pm (UTC)
Hee, sensible Becker.
telperion_15
Nov. 20th, 2012 08:54 pm (UTC)
Very nice :)
ebonyfeather
Nov. 27th, 2012 06:17 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
fredbassett
Nov. 20th, 2012 09:07 pm (UTC)
Aw, that's cute!!!
ebonyfeather
Nov. 27th, 2012 06:18 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
eriah211
Nov. 20th, 2012 09:13 pm (UTC)
Aaaaawwww ^_^
It sounds like a good plan, Becker.
ebonyfeather
Nov. 27th, 2012 06:19 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
freddiejoey
Nov. 20th, 2012 10:26 pm (UTC)
Great imagery!
ebonyfeather
Nov. 27th, 2012 06:19 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
adafrog
Nov. 20th, 2012 10:39 pm (UTC)
Cute.
ebonyfeather
Nov. 27th, 2012 06:20 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
clea2011
Nov. 21st, 2012 12:03 am (UTC)
Aww, cute! And I want a biscuit now! :-)
ebonyfeather
Nov. 27th, 2012 06:20 pm (UTC)
Thanks!

I'd rather have Becker... though if he brought biscuits too, that would be a bonus!
natchris
Nov. 21st, 2012 12:40 am (UTC)
Awww.....

Sweet!
ebonyfeather
Nov. 27th, 2012 06:21 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
joshinator
Nov. 21st, 2012 12:55 am (UTC)
Lovely!
ebonyfeather
Nov. 27th, 2012 06:21 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
flaccidduck
Nov. 21st, 2012 03:50 am (UTC)
Adorable Becker.
ebonyfeather
Nov. 27th, 2012 06:21 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
dreamer_98
Nov. 21st, 2012 03:58 am (UTC)
LOL, good thinking Becker! Om nom nom.
ebonyfeather
Nov. 27th, 2012 06:22 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
judithjohn
Nov. 21st, 2012 07:45 am (UTC)
I'm liking the picture this forms in my mind!!
ebonyfeather
Nov. 27th, 2012 06:22 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
fififolle
Nov. 21st, 2012 08:04 am (UTC)
He has cookies in his car? That's kind of cute :D No wonder he has a bit of a belly *g*
Lovely drabble. *hugs for life*
ebonyfeather
Nov. 27th, 2012 06:27 pm (UTC)
I'm sure he has a stash of cookies somewhere- he probably needs them for when the others are driving him crazy.
kristen_mara
Nov. 21st, 2012 10:47 am (UTC)

Awww, biscuit-sharing and bonding, so cute *G*

ebonyfeather
Nov. 27th, 2012 06:23 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
stealingpennies
Nov. 21st, 2012 02:16 pm (UTC)

Oh, cute critter alert! Love the huge eyes in the headlights.
ebonyfeather
Nov. 27th, 2012 06:24 pm (UTC)
There had to be a cute critter.
47eleven
Nov. 22nd, 2012 05:57 am (UTC)
Really lovely :D
ebonyfeather
Nov. 27th, 2012 06:24 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
lsellersfic
Nov. 24th, 2012 04:16 pm (UTC)
I'm glad its entirely tactical thinking on Becker's part and nothing to do with feeding biscuits to cute baby dinosaurs.
ebonyfeather
Nov. 27th, 2012 06:26 pm (UTC)
I'm sure that the critter being cute had something to do with it...
cordeliadelayne
Nov. 25th, 2012 04:50 pm (UTC)
Aw cute!
ebonyfeather
Nov. 27th, 2012 06:26 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
deinonychus_1
Dec. 4th, 2012 07:28 pm (UTC)
Eek! Poor creature, but I hope Becker doesn't come to regret feeding it...
ebonyfeather
Dec. 12th, 2012 07:34 pm (UTC)
I'm sure he won't regret it.
basched
Jan. 28th, 2013 12:36 pm (UTC)

Aw! Sweet! Good thing he didn't run it over then!

A great drabble, lovely imagery...but sorry. I can't help thinking what kind of biscuits Becker's got stashed away. ;)
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