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Drabble: Saving Captain Becker

Fandom: Primeval
Pairing: Connor/Becker
Rating: PG-13
Notes: For primeval100: challenge 260: Shoot to kill.




Saving Captain Becker

Connor’s hands were shaking.

“Let him go, or I’ll shoot.”

Their attacker laughed, using Becker as a human shield, a knife pressed to his throat. The wound on Becker’s side was bleeding heavily, Becker’s skin pale, his eyes half closed. Connor knew he had to do something.

So, he’d grabbed Becker’s fallen gun.

“No you won’t, kid.”

But the man underestimated what Becker meant to him. He remembered Becker’s lessons: If it’s you or them, you shoot to kill.

Connor did just that.

Stepping over their fallen assailant, he hurried to Becker’s side, grabbing his mobile.

“I need an ambulance…”






Comments

( 48 comments — Leave a comment )
rodlox
Apr. 26th, 2012 10:12 pm (UTC)
Yay Connor!
(best shot may've been through Becker, so that ambulance better hurry)

very tense drabble. bravo.
ebonyfeather
Apr. 26th, 2012 10:30 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
Connor wanted to be the hero for a change.
clea2011
Apr. 26th, 2012 10:29 pm (UTC)
Meep! Becker! Hurry Connor! Good drabble :-)
ebonyfeather
Apr. 26th, 2012 10:32 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
It'll be fine- help is on the way.
freddiejoey
Apr. 26th, 2012 10:43 pm (UTC)
Go Connor!

Nice tense drabble!
ebonyfeather
Apr. 28th, 2012 06:12 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
adafrog
Apr. 26th, 2012 10:55 pm (UTC)
Wow, go Connor.
ebonyfeather
Apr. 28th, 2012 06:12 pm (UTC)
He'd do whatever it took to save Becker.
aunteeneenah
Apr. 26th, 2012 10:59 pm (UTC)
Excellent result! Hooray for Connor and I'm certain that Becker is going to be fine thanks to Connor's obvious love for him! Wonderful.
ebonyfeather
Apr. 28th, 2012 06:20 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
Connor wouldn't let anything bad happen to Becker.
sandyleepotts
Apr. 27th, 2012 05:12 am (UTC)
Wow!

I loved this... Now for a backstory explaining just how they got there.
ebonyfeather
Apr. 28th, 2012 06:20 pm (UTC)
Thank you!

There may be a backstory at some point...
sandyleepotts
Apr. 28th, 2012 06:26 pm (UTC)
Look forwards to it.
judithjohn
Apr. 27th, 2012 06:37 am (UTC)
Really powerful!
ebonyfeather
Apr. 28th, 2012 06:22 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
nietie
Apr. 27th, 2012 06:46 am (UTC)
Intense and great angst! Love it!
ebonyfeather
Apr. 28th, 2012 06:22 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
flaccidduck
Apr. 27th, 2012 07:33 am (UTC)
Fantastic!
ebonyfeather
Apr. 28th, 2012 06:23 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
natchris
Apr. 27th, 2012 07:48 am (UTC)
Wow we! Great tension.
ebonyfeather
Apr. 28th, 2012 06:23 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
joshinator
Apr. 27th, 2012 09:08 am (UTC)
Epic!
ebonyfeather
Apr. 28th, 2012 06:23 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
kristen_mara
Apr. 27th, 2012 10:09 am (UTC)

Eeeep *flails* DeterminedConnor is quite a force to be reckoned with!

ebonyfeather
Apr. 28th, 2012 06:24 pm (UTC)
Connor isn't going to let anyone hurt his Becker and get away with it!
tay_21
Apr. 27th, 2012 04:02 pm (UTC)
Good on Connor but hurry!!!!!! Becker needs help NOW! (Great drabble. :-D)
ebonyfeather
Apr. 28th, 2012 06:26 pm (UTC)
Don't worry, help is on the way for Becker!

Thanks!
fredbassett
Apr. 27th, 2012 06:31 pm (UTC)
Go Connor!! Very tense.
ebonyfeather
Apr. 28th, 2012 06:26 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
deinonychus_1
Apr. 27th, 2012 07:08 pm (UTC)
Meep! Becker!!!! Good shot, Connor. Now we just have to hope the ambulance arrives in time.
ebonyfeather
Apr. 28th, 2012 06:27 pm (UTC)
It's ok- Becker will be fine.
telperion_15
Apr. 27th, 2012 07:21 pm (UTC)
*wibbles*
ebonyfeather
Apr. 28th, 2012 06:31 pm (UTC)
They'll be fine, honest!
knitekat
Apr. 27th, 2012 08:12 pm (UTC)
Ooh, tense and go Connor. Connor ftw!
ebonyfeather
Apr. 28th, 2012 06:34 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
celeste9
Apr. 28th, 2012 02:49 am (UTC)
Oh, Connor! It's lovely to see him being the hero and I'm sure Becker will be glad to know Connor was listening when he spoke!
ebonyfeather
Apr. 28th, 2012 06:35 pm (UTC)
Connor deserved a chance to be the hero and save Becker for a change.
lsellersfic
Apr. 28th, 2012 06:44 pm (UTC)
Wow! Go Connor!
ebonyfeather
Apr. 29th, 2012 11:28 am (UTC)
Thanks!
When it comes to Becker, Connor will do what it takes.
samueljames
May. 1st, 2012 04:15 pm (UTC)
Yay for Connor but fingers crossed that the ambulance driver drives like Rachid.
ebonyfeather
May. 6th, 2012 07:36 pm (UTC)
He'll be fine.

I really must do a Sirens/Primeval crossover sometime... I miss Sirens.
samueljames
May. 6th, 2012 07:38 pm (UTC)
I miss it too. I've tried to think of crossover ideas before because the Primeval lot are bound to need medical attention once in a while. I think a crossover would work quite well.
ebonyfeather
May. 6th, 2012 07:41 pm (UTC)
I just want to see Ash's face when he meets Becker. Becker would definitely be his type. And then Matt can get all jealous (so can Stuart)... *shoos away the bunny*
samueljames
May. 6th, 2012 07:42 pm (UTC)
*Feeds the bunny*

Ash would definitely like a macho man like Becker.
fififolle
May. 2nd, 2012 07:38 pm (UTC)
Oh! Brave Connor! Great drabble.
ebonyfeather
May. 6th, 2012 07:37 pm (UTC)
When it comes to protecting Becker, Connor will do what he has to.
cordeliadelayne
May. 9th, 2012 11:17 pm (UTC)
Ooh, go Connor!
ebonyfeather
May. 15th, 2012 05:51 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
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