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Drabble: Ours

Fandom: Primeval
Pairing: None
Rating: PG
Notes: For primeval100: challenge 249: Hidden in plain sight
Spoilers: If you’ve seen the camouflage critters from ep. 3.02, you’re good.

Ours

Remaining perfectly still, he watched as another of the odd, tall creatures came into their den. The creatures came in, making strange sounds, but they didn’t see him crouching, waiting. He and his kind had come here through the sparkling air a long time ago, finding themselves trapped in this strange place, but they had made themselves a home. Now it was being invaded.

Letting his camouflage drop away, he heard the interlopers scream in fright as he pounced. The creature tried to flee as he slashed with teeth and claws.

This was their den now, and they’d defend it.



Comments

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lukadreaming
Feb. 14th, 2012 07:02 pm (UTC)
Scary critters!
ebonyfeather
Feb. 14th, 2012 07:23 pm (UTC)
They were creepy little things.
knitekat
Feb. 14th, 2012 07:18 pm (UTC)
Ooh and eek. Nice look at it from the critter's pov.
ebonyfeather
Feb. 14th, 2012 07:24 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
freddiejoey
Feb. 14th, 2012 07:39 pm (UTC)
Clever glimpse at the world through a creature's eyes.
ebonyfeather
Feb. 14th, 2012 09:48 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
reggietate
Feb. 14th, 2012 07:45 pm (UTC)
*meep!*
ebonyfeather
Feb. 14th, 2012 09:49 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
telperion_15
Feb. 14th, 2012 08:18 pm (UTC)
Great drabble! Surprised no one else has thought of this take on it actually! :)
ebonyfeather
Feb. 14th, 2012 09:49 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
I thought someone else would have used those critters too.
clea2011
Feb. 14th, 2012 10:08 pm (UTC)
Very good use of the prompt, those creatures are perfect for it :-)
ebonyfeather
Feb. 15th, 2012 06:31 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
The camouflage critters were just defending themselves...
flaccidduck
Feb. 14th, 2012 10:33 pm (UTC)
Terrific!
ebonyfeather
Feb. 15th, 2012 06:31 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
deinonychus_1
Feb. 14th, 2012 11:03 pm (UTC)
eeeek! Good drabble.
ebonyfeather
Feb. 15th, 2012 06:31 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
nietie
Feb. 15th, 2012 09:10 am (UTC)
Awesome use of the prompt.
ebonyfeather
Feb. 15th, 2012 06:32 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
rapidfaith
Feb. 15th, 2012 11:10 am (UTC)
*shudders* note to self - politely knock first.
ebonyfeather
Feb. 15th, 2012 06:32 pm (UTC)
Good plan!
fredbassett
Feb. 15th, 2012 04:28 pm (UTC)
Eeep, scary! And a great take on the prompt.
ebonyfeather
Feb. 15th, 2012 06:36 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
Those critters were prefect for this prompt.
dreamer_98
Feb. 16th, 2012 04:53 am (UTC)
Ooh, some creature-fighting action! Nicely done.
ebonyfeather
Feb. 18th, 2012 08:26 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
samueljames
Feb. 17th, 2012 01:23 am (UTC)
Very creepy creature drabble.
ebonyfeather
Feb. 18th, 2012 08:27 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
lsellersfic
Feb. 18th, 2012 02:24 pm (UTC)
Meep!
ebonyfeather
Feb. 18th, 2012 08:27 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
cordeliadelayne
Feb. 21st, 2012 08:28 pm (UTC)
Eek, very creepy!
ebonyfeather
Feb. 22nd, 2012 10:24 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
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