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Fandom: Primeval
Pairing: None
Rating: PG
Notes: For primeval100: challenge 248: Shattered


Things will never be the same again...


Becker stared at the mess of plastic and metal that had been crushed into the ground inside the huge footprint. The barrel was recognisable, if completely bent, but the stock had been shattered under a few tonnes of pissed off dinosaur.

The poor thing hadn’t stood a chance.

“That was my favourite shotgun,” he lamented, bending down to pick up the pieces.

Danny and Connor came up beside him, Danny patting his arm in sympathy.

“We can get you a new one, right Danny?” Connor said, but Becker shook his head.

“It won’t be the same. I liked that one.”

Comments

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tay_21
Feb. 7th, 2012 06:20 pm (UTC)
LOL!!!!!!!! You could have made the pairing Becker/Shot Gun. :-)) THis was freaking hilarious. Poor poor Becker.
ebonyfeather
Feb. 7th, 2012 10:00 pm (UTC)
I should have!
I did feel bad for being mean to Becker...
clea2011
Feb. 7th, 2012 07:35 pm (UTC)
Oh dear, poor Becker! And I agree with Tay on the pairing! Good drabble. :)
ebonyfeather
Feb. 7th, 2012 10:05 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
I should have put Becker/Gun...
deinonychus_1
Feb. 7th, 2012 08:04 pm (UTC)
Lol and awww! Poor Becker, bless him.
ebonyfeather
Feb. 7th, 2012 10:05 pm (UTC)
I'm sure someone will give him a hug, cheer him up.
knitekat
Feb. 7th, 2012 08:24 pm (UTC)
LOL. How could you kill Becker's gun? ;) Poor Becker.
ebonyfeather
Feb. 7th, 2012 10:22 pm (UTC)
I know; bad me!
telperion_15
Feb. 7th, 2012 08:33 pm (UTC)
Oh noes! How could be so mean to poor Becker? *g*
ebonyfeather
Feb. 7th, 2012 10:20 pm (UTC)
I'll get him a new dangerous toy to apologise.
lukadreaming
Feb. 7th, 2012 09:20 pm (UTC)
LOL! OTP for sure!
ebonyfeather
Feb. 7th, 2012 10:21 pm (UTC)
He does love his guns...
adafrog
Feb. 7th, 2012 11:07 pm (UTC)
awww...it's hard to lose your favorite gun.
ebonyfeather
Feb. 10th, 2012 07:57 pm (UTC)
He'll miss it.
basched
Feb. 7th, 2012 11:22 pm (UTC)

Aw sad....poor Becker. He's lost his very favourite gun. How will it ever be replaced.

Great drab, Ebony...as always! XD
ebonyfeather
Feb. 10th, 2012 07:58 pm (UTC)
The others will get him another gun, something bigger, shinier and more dangerous...
cordeliadelayne
Feb. 7th, 2012 11:41 pm (UTC)
*sporfle*
ebonyfeather
Feb. 10th, 2012 07:58 pm (UTC)
*g* Thanks!
freddiejoey
Feb. 8th, 2012 01:26 am (UTC)
This is so funny.

I can just see Becker's forlorn expression.
ebonyfeather
Feb. 10th, 2012 08:02 pm (UTC)
Thanks.
He does have a 'wounded puppy' expression to rival Connors, doesn't he?
dreamer_98
Feb. 8th, 2012 01:54 am (UTC)
Oh Becker and his attachment to his guns.
ebonyfeather
Feb. 10th, 2012 08:02 pm (UTC)
He does love them.
nietie
Feb. 8th, 2012 02:56 pm (UTC)
Awwww! His favourite toy! You are so cruel! *vbg*
ebonyfeather
Feb. 10th, 2012 08:03 pm (UTC)
I know, but I'll give him something new to play with instead.
kristen_mara
Feb. 9th, 2012 06:24 am (UTC)

LOL - let us rush to comfort the disconsolate boy in his hour of need!

ebonyfeather
Feb. 10th, 2012 08:03 pm (UTC)
I think there'll be a queue of people waiting to cheer him up!
fififolle
Feb. 9th, 2012 04:50 pm (UTC)
Aww! Bless him. You could feel his pain, nice work!!!
ebonyfeather
Feb. 10th, 2012 08:04 pm (UTC)
Thanks! Couldn't resist when I saw this prompt.
lsellersfic
Feb. 9th, 2012 05:45 pm (UTC)
Oh no! Not the gun!
ebonyfeather
Feb. 10th, 2012 08:05 pm (UTC)
Alas, the gun is beyond repair.
samueljames
Feb. 11th, 2012 11:21 pm (UTC)
Poor Becker *g*
ebonyfeather
Feb. 14th, 2012 07:05 pm (UTC)
I'm sure they'll find him a new toy...
fredbassett
Feb. 17th, 2012 08:13 pm (UTC)
Aw, poor Becker!
ebonyfeather
Feb. 18th, 2012 08:24 pm (UTC)
It was rather mean to break his favourite toy...
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