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Drabble: Fall from grace

Fandom: Primeval
Pairing: None
Rating: PG
Notes: For primeval100: challenge 246: Fall from grace



Fall from grace

Stephen watched as Nick Cutter and the team returned from the anomaly they’d just attended. Only a few months ago, that would have been him. He would have been laughing along with them, sharing stories, but he was no longer welcome.

Since Helen’s vindictive revelation in the Forest of Dean, Cutter had barely spoken to him. The only time Nick looked at him now was with eyes full of hatred and distrust. Of all the things he’d done in the past, Helen was the one mistake he wished he could go back and change.

He wanted his best friend back.




Comments

( 34 comments — Leave a comment )
clea2011
Jan. 19th, 2012 10:12 pm (UTC)
Nice drabble - poor Stephen :(
ebonyfeather
Jan. 22nd, 2012 03:47 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
knitekat
Jan. 19th, 2012 10:15 pm (UTC)
Poor Stephen. Great look at what happened to him.
ebonyfeather
Jan. 22nd, 2012 03:48 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
kristen_mara
Jan. 19th, 2012 10:19 pm (UTC)

*cries* The angst! Fix-it sequel? *bats eyelashes*
ebonyfeather
Jan. 22nd, 2012 03:49 pm (UTC)
*hands over a tissue*

There may be a fixit (if the bunnies cooperate)
tay_21
Jan. 19th, 2012 10:22 pm (UTC)
:'-( Poor Stephen. Excellent use of the prompt. :-)
ebonyfeather
Jan. 22nd, 2012 03:49 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
samueljames
Jan. 19th, 2012 10:36 pm (UTC)
Poor Stephen though I see things from Nick's side too.
ebonyfeather
Jan. 22nd, 2012 03:50 pm (UTC)
I can see Nick's point of view too, but I still felt sorry for Stephen.
telperion_15
Jan. 19th, 2012 10:47 pm (UTC)
*whimpers* Poor Stephen...
ebonyfeather
Jan. 22nd, 2012 03:52 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
freddiejoey
Jan. 19th, 2012 11:01 pm (UTC)
Treeific use of the prompt. And great description of Stephen's pain and regret.
ebonyfeather
Jan. 22nd, 2012 03:52 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
As soon as I saw the prompt, this was the first thing that came to mind.
tli
Jan. 19th, 2012 11:08 pm (UTC)
Oh, boys! Very nicely done.
ebonyfeather
Jan. 22nd, 2012 03:53 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
dreamer_98
Jan. 20th, 2012 12:36 am (UTC)
Aww, poor Stephen. :(
ebonyfeather
Jan. 22nd, 2012 03:53 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
reggietate
Jan. 20th, 2012 10:43 am (UTC)
*meep* Oh, Stephen! *pets him*
ebonyfeather
Jan. 22nd, 2012 03:54 pm (UTC)
He might have screwed up, but it wasn't all his fault.
nietie
Jan. 20th, 2012 02:08 pm (UTC)
MEEP! So sad!
ebonyfeather
Jan. 22nd, 2012 03:54 pm (UTC)
It's okay- he'll be fine *points Stephen in the direction of Denial*
fredbassett
Jan. 20th, 2012 05:07 pm (UTC)
Ouch, poor Stephen.
ebonyfeather
Jan. 22nd, 2012 03:55 pm (UTC)
It wasn't all his fault, but he seemed to get the worst of the blame.
deinonychus_1
Jan. 20th, 2012 08:54 pm (UTC)
oh, poor Stephen. Great drabble.
ebonyfeather
Jan. 22nd, 2012 03:55 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
talliw
Jan. 20th, 2012 09:03 pm (UTC)
I#m asking myself if Stephen would have taken the chance if he'd had the opportunity to go back in time.
ebonyfeather
Jan. 22nd, 2012 03:57 pm (UTC)
I think if he knew he could alter it, he might take the risk.
fififolle
Jan. 20th, 2012 09:50 pm (UTC)
Aw :( Poor Stephen. That's really very sad. Nice work.
ebonyfeather
Jan. 22nd, 2012 03:57 pm (UTC)
Thank you! This prompt made me think of Stephen.
cordeliadelayne
Jan. 21st, 2012 09:39 pm (UTC)
*snifffle* Poor Stephen.
ebonyfeather
Jan. 22nd, 2012 03:58 pm (UTC)
*offers a tissue*
Thanks.
lsellersfic
Jan. 29th, 2012 03:26 am (UTC)
Poor Stephen!
ebonyfeather
Jan. 29th, 2012 01:29 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
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